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Hi all Me and my went to weston- super-mare last night after I had bean to the MG fest 08 all day had a fish and chip supper came home about 9 pm .And this morning it burnt down. so sad
 

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The fish and chip supper burnt down? or the pier at weston-super-mare?
 

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dont you watch the news? lol
If a sentence does not contain the subject matter, you cannot refer to it as "it" hence why I asked if the fish and chips burnt down.

I also added in the pier, which was not mentioned in the sentence to highlight the error further.

Hi all Me and my went to weston- super-mare last night after I had bean to the MG fest 08 all day had a fish and chip supper came home about 9 pm .And this morning it burnt down. so sad

Should be:

Hi all, last night I went to MG fest 08 located at Weston- super-mare pier. Today I have since discovered it has burnt down!
 

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If a sentence does not contain the subject matter, you cannot refer to it as "it" hence why I asked if the fish and chips burnt down.

I also added in the pier, which was not mentioned in the sentence to highlight the error further.




Should be:
wow, you are very cleaver! lol
 

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what I ment to say was I took my family down to weston-super-mare for some fish and chips and to have a walk on the beach, After I had spent all day at the MG fest 08 whitch was held at the heritage motor centre ,when we woke up this morning I put on the tv ,to hear that the pier had burn't down.
 

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the two words I've taken from this thread (aside from the pyrotechnical fish & chip supper) were:

"Bean" and "Cleaver"

Bean Cleaver...hmmm..for some reason that might just be the funniest thing I have ever seen :D
 

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Hi all Me and my went to weston- super-mare last night after I had bean to the MG fest 08 all day had a fish and chip supper came home about 9 pm .And this morning it burnt down. so sad
The way its worded makes me think that the whole of Weston-Super-Mare burnt down. I could be wrong though.
 
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